1, you screwed up the names (this is the lesser of the 2 things). if ur gonna write a story stick to the same names!!!!«12» 8 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2009-08-25 07:36:50it was still i really good story names or not i mean i didnt give a shit wat there names were they were having really good sex that mad me wet and my nipples so hard and thats all that matters keep writing ur goodAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-21 02:33:55great story except for 2 things. Black porn if ur gonna write a story stick to the same names!!!!«12» 2, you shouldn’t write in a wall of words, you need to make paragraphs. stop reminding meAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-20 08:40:07who’s rachel and anthony? stop reminding meAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-20 08:40:07who’s rachel and anthony? if ur gonna write a story stick to the same names!!!!«12» stop reminding meAnonymous readerReport 2009-08-20 08:40:07who’s rachel and anthony? 1, you screwed up the names (this is the lesser of the 2 things).
