16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2011-08-16 16:26:34What the bloody motherfuckin shit is thisREADERReport 2007-04-01 22:35:41i couldnt put it any better than the last guy. the non erotic adaptation and your view on how the story will play out in the next book is very insightful, there is detail in there that not many people would have thought of, keep up the good work«1234» great story, i love the idea about the pheonix. Free black porn great story, i love the idea about the pheonix. great story, i love the idea about the pheonix. 16 comments«1234»anonymous readerReport 2011-08-16 16:26:34What the bloody motherfuckin shit is thisREADERReport 2007-04-01 22:35:41i couldnt put it any better than the last guy. its worthy of one of jo’s ideas.READERReport 2007-03-25 22:49:13anyone who doent like it go suck a freaking cock i dont care what you all say it was pretty good to see what you think might happen in this story
insult doesnt apply if your a woman. …think of something equally bad and then you can go and do that
brdman keep it up i liked it a lot
and all the rest if you dont like it so much why are you reading it you fucking idiots
