If you don’t like find somewhere else, but if you can let me try and improve you may be surprised. For people like reader JJ than I will write again. Free black porn I should be able to turn another part soon.anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 19:35:26This is utter and complete shit, yet you decided to write another story after this. If you don’t like find somewhere else, but if you can let me try and improve you may be surprised. Since its grammatical errors is the issues, that is fixable. 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-12 11:58:05Achilles &Briseis Faranonymous readerReport 2013-02-08 21:43:09needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER that knows enough to use a GOOD EDITOR. Really, don’t hold back, hit them hard you moron!!!!anonymous readerReport 2012-10-23 12:22:26totally agree with other readers, crap, gave up after first paragraph«12» 9 comments«12»Anonymous readerReport 2015-01-12 11:58:05Achilles &Briseis Faranonymous readerReport 2013-02-08 21:43:09needs a total rewrite by a GOOD WRITER that knows enough to use a GOOD EDITOR. remove all the greek names it is to confusing.anonymous readerReport 2012-11-12 17:16:11For those you are complaining, I will write again and proofread my stuff.
