6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-19 10:59:50It was different but good. I think you should tell more about what happened afterwords. Free black porn But overall a very good story. Just my opinion though/anonymous readerReport 2012-05-01 22:11:12well written, but the character-development makes no sense to me – from hating each other to mates, just like that? In reality, though I enjoyed this it needs to be fleshed out and outlined more in all aspects. 10/10anonymous readerReport 2013-02-17 08:10:28You vaguely outline the scenes. Just my opinion though/anonymous readerReport 2012-05-01 22:11:12well written, but the character-development makes no sense to me – from hating each other to mates, just like that? Would have liked more details. I think you should tell more about what happened afterwords. 10/10anonymous readerReport 2013-02-17 08:10:28You vaguely outline the scenes. 10/10anonymous readerReport 2013-02-17 08:10:28You vaguely outline the scenes. Would have liked more details. Would have liked more details. 6 comments«12»anonymous readerReport 2013-07-19 10:59:50It was different but good. there´s got to be at least a tiny reason for such a drastic change, like that their previous differences were only due to some misunderstanding or so. …other than that, well done!anonymous readerReport 2011-07-04 12:36:52Kinda weird but it was great at the ending.anonymous readerReport 2010-08-08
