delete and rewrite using a good editor before reposting THEN IT MIGHT BE WORTH READING.anonymous readerReport 2013-06-01 18:21:12Not really much to say that hasn’t already been said. It stands good on its own but I’d like to see you edit it and add more. Black porn I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2. I’d still give 5 stars for the story and look forward to part 2. WHERE ARE THE PARENTS? who are they and why should we care about them or want them together? WHAT KIND OF SEXUAL EXPERIENCE DO THEY HAVE. WHERE ARE THE PARENTS? AS IS THIS WAS WAY TO SHORT AND WAY TO RUSHED AND NEEDS TO BE DELETED.anonymous readerReport 2013-07-15 21:15:41not good this reads like it should be chapter two not one. YOU NEED A LOT MORE DETAIL AND AND A MUCH LONGER CHAPTER TO TELL THE STORY. WHAT KIND OF RELATIONSHIP DID THEY HAVE BEFORE THIS? WHERE ARE THE PARENTS? Thanks for taking the time to write it.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 15:15:40a very good start but keep this story going.«123» Thanks for taking the time to write it.anonymous readerReport 2013-04-18 15:15:40a very
